Thursday, January 3, 2008

67 wutever

revamp of 66

5 comments:

Andrew Smith said...

good again but you have the same problem as last time! Except now instead of being ambiguous it's just wrong. Her upper body is way below the horizon line but when you get down to her feet they are almost on the same plane (level with the horizon line).
The front leg should be much further down on the picture plane.
Also, you could clear up the spatial ambiguity with the upper legs if you caused the closer leg to overlap the further leg.
Nice work though! You're getting a lot better.

Erica Rosario said...

yeah i do not like them much either :) thx

Erica Rosario said...

ok fixed her a lil bit

Mette said...

She's really cute, especially her face, and the fix helped. :)
but it kinda looks like her left leg is her right leg and the right is her left, - if you know what I mean. Both on this and the previous one.

Erica Rosario said...

yeah short skirts and healthy legs ar tricky lol :P